4月13日雅思大作文示范寫作|犯罪是天性使然還是社會環境影響
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April 15, 2024雅思作文真題直擊 | | 欄目推送說明每場雅思考試之后，第一時間分享本場考試雅思A類大作文的范文權威解析。歡迎每周鎖定。本期作者：張婷婷2024年4月13日雅思大作文題目Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.(2024/04/13)范文及解析IntroductionThe public's viewpoint toelucidatethe chiefculpritofcriminalityhas been sparked by the recentspikein the crime rate. While many opine that someone is born to be amalefactor, others maintain that wealth and social environment are the two core variables.解析本次考題是2014考過的題目，討論犯罪的原因是天性使然還是社會環境；雙方觀點內容上并不沖突，分別論述不同因素的影響即可；? elucidate v. <正式> 闡明，解釋；? culprit n.問題的起因；? criminality n.犯罪；犯罪行為;? spike n.猛增，急升；? malefactor n.作惡者；罪犯；譯文參考：最近犯罪率的急劇上升引起了公眾對犯罪的原因的關注。雖然許多人認為有人天生是一個罪犯，但也有人認為財富和社會環境是兩個核心變量。Body 1Exterior circumstances are crucialparametersexerting an immense effect on the overall crime rate. In a nation providing arobustwelfare system accompanied with a high level of employment, rarely will citizensperpetrate crimes. For instance, while everyone in Switzerland possesses a gun, the nation's crime rate isnegligible, mostly due to itstranquiland prosperous society. Furthermore, the crime rate varies with societal environments. For example,afflicted withan upsurge in the unemployment rate, there was a marked increment inlarcenyand robbery during the Great Depression in America. The laid-off would be bound totransgressin order to survive during the regression in economy.解析(1) 外部環境是對整體犯罪率產生巨大影響的關鍵(2) 犯罪率隨社會環境而變化?parametern.界限，范圍；參數，變量；?robustadj.（系統或組織）穩固的，健全的；?perpetratevt.犯（罪）；做（惡）;?negligibleadj.微不足道的，不值一提的;?tranquiladj.平靜的，寧靜的;?afflicted with受到……的折磨或痛苦;?larcenyn.盜竊；盜竊罪?transgressn.犯罪；違反；譯文參考：外部環境是對整體犯罪率產生巨大影響的關鍵。在一個福利制度健全、就業率高的國家，公民很少會犯罪。例如，雖然瑞士的每個人都有槍，但這個國家的犯罪率可以忽略不計，這主要歸功于其寧靜繁榮的社會。此外，犯罪率隨社會環境而變化。例如，在美國經濟大蕭條期間，由于失業率上升，盜竊和搶劫明顯增加。在經濟衰退的背景下，下崗職工為了生存，必然會出現違法行為。Body 2The other stance is that some people areinnatecriminals because the nature of humans is greed. It is this genetic character thatlurespeople to easily go astray. If the temptation is challenging to be refrained from, people probablypredisposethemselves to being hot-headed and rushing into danger without taking negative consequences into accounts. For example, in many countriesplaguedby corruption, greedy officials takebribesin order to satiate theirballooningdesire for a moreaffluentlife. That is to say, as long as greed isingrainedin humans’ minds, crimes cannot be effectively curbed, not to mention beingutterly expunged.解析(1) 有些人天生就是罪犯，因為人類的本性是貪婪的(2) 只要貪婪在人類的思想中根深蒂固，犯罪就不能得到有效的遏制?innateadj.先天的，固有的；?lurev.引誘，誘惑；?predisposev.使傾向于，使受……的影響；?plaguev.困擾，折磨；煩擾；?briben.賄賂；?ballooningadj.充氣的，鼓脹的；?affluentadj.富裕的，富足的；?ingrainedadj.根深蒂固的；?utterlyadv.完全地，徹底地；?expungevt.擦去；刪掉；譯文參考：另一種觀點是，有些人天生就是罪犯，因為人類的本性是貪婪的。正是這種遺傳特征使人容易誤入歧途。如果誘惑難以控制，人們可能會傾向于頭腦發熱，不考慮可怕的后果就沖向危險。例如，在許多受腐敗困擾的國家，貪得無厭的官員收受賄賂以滿足他們對更富裕生活的不斷膨脹的愿望。也就是說，只要貪婪在人類的思想中根深蒂固，犯罪就不能得到有效的遏制，更不用說被徹底消滅了。ConclusionIn my book, the reason why people violate laws cannot belucidly enunciated. In certainwell-to-donations, like the USA, intelligent and well-off people will become anabuserto sexually assault the young with a view to satisfying their abnormal psychological need. It does not, however, merelyportendthat committing crimes has to be associated with people who are financiallystrapped. These would-be criminals depend extensively on their own conductinvolvingvarious unpredictabletriggers.解析?in my book在我看來；?lucidlyadv.清透地；清晰地；?enunciatev.闡明；?well-to-doadj.小康的；富裕的；?abusern.濫用者；施虐者；?portendvt.；意味著；?strappedadj.缺錢的，手頭拮據的；?triggern.起因，誘因；譯文參考：在我看來，人們違法的原因無法清楚地闡明。在某些富裕的國家，如美國，聰明和富裕的人會成為施虐者，性侵犯年輕人，以滿足他們不正常的心理需求。然而，這并不僅僅預示著犯罪必須與經濟拮據的人聯系在一起。這些潛在的罪犯很大程度上取決于他們自己的行為，這些行為包含各種不可預測的觸發因素。
